I like the plot, and the narration. The animation is pretty neat but it could've been better. the only thing that really strikes to me as really bad is the microphone (pretty sure it's the mic). it's kind of dull. please use a different mic next time. the overall is really nice but it's really hard to understand what the fat guy is saying. i'm not really good at commenting good stuffs but rest assured, i liked it overall. :P